by The Black Angel Lloyd Rose Apr 5, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Ashes, Ashes, all fall down, |
by Kayd
I like the use of metaphors that you used, it really adds a quality I can't explain. Not many people can get that in there, so many congratz! |
Very well written! I loved the way you made it rhyme it was an awesome dark poem! keep it up!!! ^_^ |