Comments : They Say

  • 18 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Very good poem and also deep, and another thing everyone feels whether their 5 or 15 so again nice job......GJ

  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    Funny how what "they" say is usually wrong.
    For the most part, your rhyming was pretty good and flowed well. l liked the reference to fairy tales, it made the whole "love" idea seem a bit more ideal somehow.
    And your prince charming will find you eventually, it just may be a different person than you think it will be.

  • 18 years ago

    by Always4You

    I thought that was really good..I liked it a lot! This part was my favorite
    They say that wishes and dreams
    Really do come true
    Then why aren't we together?
    How come I'm not with you?

    Great job! Keep it up!
    ~Always4You~

  • 18 years ago

    by christina marie

    Oh gosh. jeez. **5/5**. wonderful poem! you're a PERFECT other half! LOL. Love ya!

    LOVE
    Lolli

  • 17 years ago

    by cassanova

    Waiting and wondering sucks you expressed yourself great in this poem...... pleas check out my reacent "always in my eye"