Wow that actually brought tears to my eyes. esp the last little verse. it is so touching. amazing.

So sad - a great contrast to the first part, and a reakky great structure. I'm in tears!

Peace. [Sole]

It can only get better....will there be a part 3?

[lostlaureate - come find me]

O, wow, how sad. Very beautifully written and great structure. You almost got me to cry which is really hard, I nearly never cry.

5/5, West

Wow another great poem to read and it flows on from the first very well! i hope to be reading a third poem following on
great job
jemma xxx

Omg you made me speechless in a positive way though :) this one is so sad but als has a good structure like said above :) also i liked the ending, while througout the whole poem says :"Sweet amy do not cry.", it ends with:"Sweet amy cried." excellent poem once again :) i can't wait till part 3 :)
5/5

~StefQ

Great following up poem i can't wait for the third one. I loved this one it was great

awesome write

~GLASS~

Wow I loved this one too. Speshly cause i love ballet!! But it was a good poem lol I hope to see part 3 very soon, Unless you've already done it lol

luv natalie x-x

This poem was great...relly god sequel.
Ilike this poem because Amy's illness and harships can really symbolize the difficulties we all face in life.

Let me know when you have part 3 completed becuz I would really enjoy reading it...I just know it willbe just as great as the first couple!

Very well written. very clear story thoughout and a brilliant ending

5/5

I liked the way it ended, i'm glad it wasnt a sad ending. 5/5

I don't know what to comment. It doesn't have the same power the first part did. It wasn't bad, poor, or fair. It was good. But I don't think it was excellent. Close, but no cigar. Or whatever you want to call it.

Awesome poem. I loved it. very good follow up to the first. The flow was awesome. you are a very good writer. keep up the amazing work.

I love your poems. they are so descriptive and have the perfect vibe. Keep it up!

Amazing...i loved it...i am simply speachless...nice job...
Emma 5/5
i cant wait for the third part....

Another awesome poem, keep writing such great poems.
I love your work
love Tara-Kay

Great write.. its so sad.. i loved it 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Great write.. its so sad.. i loved it 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Once again, touching almost brought tears to my eyes i also love the repetion it makes the poem a lot better

I cant wait till the third part you are a great poet very descriptive it is wonderful good job