AW that poem was so sad. I loved it. You are very talented. keep up the good work. 5/5*

I liked this second part to your uh series i suppose is what it is? this poem is at least as good as the first part if not better and everythign a good poem should. It tells a story and pushes emotion with great strength, it has an excellent (albeit complex) rhyme scheme and has excellent flow all in all an amazing peice :)
~jacob

Wow..that is a sad poem and truly beautiful. 5.5

thanks for sharing
shannon

Again, it is really brilliant, but for me each part can't really stand on it's own, that is the one thing I don't know if I really love. It is a nice idea and I will be certain to read part three. I did like it how you changed where the poem was, because there isn't one set of emotions, one tone alone that can be used to describe an entire life of a person, so nice job with that.

-Tainted

I Love It 5/5