The World Inside Those Special Eyes

by supaflyhonkyguy   Apr 6, 2006


Have you ever looked into ones eyes ,
and saw the world inside

When you looked into those special eyes,
could you just break down and cry

without those eyes bring cloudy skies,
hail falls from above

why else would you feel this way,
if you weren't in love

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  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Short and to the point! It was the perfect length to get everything said without beating the reader over the head with the point. I like it a lot. I'll have to read more of your poems!

  • 17 years ago

    by Coeur Cassa Sage

    Wow. Again, alot of meaning in little words. That's always good!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Wow, this is the definition of short and sweet. The flow you created here was amazing. Nice read! 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Aww, this was so sweet. i loved it. it was nice and short, you said all that needed to be said. well done hun.
    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Very good write, the flow is great the wordings just right and the emotion in the poem is great. good imagery also

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