Very good write, the flow is great the wordings just right and the emotion in the poem is great. good imagery also

Aww, this was so sweet. i loved it. it was nice and short, you said all that needed to be said. well done hun.
much love and many kisses,
bex

Wow, this is the definition of short and sweet. The flow you created here was amazing. Nice read! 5/5

marcella

Wow. Again, alot of meaning in little words. That's always good!

Short and to the point! It was the perfect length to get everything said without beating the reader over the head with the point. I like it a lot. I'll have to read more of your poems!