by supaflyhonkyguy Apr 6, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
My love is in my site, |
Hey, first of all im not great at commenting on love peoms, as i dont read them often but ill give it a go. I really liked the emotion expressed in this poem, it was really sad. But (this might be just me), i thouhgt it was a tad too unrealistic. It sounds like a scene from a soap oprah or something. I thouhgt you should of split it up into two parts, one while you witness this, and one with how your feeling. Yet this is a sad read, very meaningful though. Keep it up! Thanks for your comment! xx |
by kendra
Im sorry i think this poem is kinda overrated...write about something more greusome or fantasy..stop with the pissing and the moaning. |