Comments : What I Have Learnt...

  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Damn peoples its been a while :o)

  • 18 years ago

    by Raydeen

    Wow.. that's like... wow! I definitely wish I could write like you! keep it up. that is one of the best poems I have ever read in my life! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    TITTA!!...First and foremost I really want to smack you for telling me your poems have been crap! You kidding me?! Please tell me you were NOT referring to this one!
    Secondly,
    I have learnt that you cant solve all your problems
    The road is rough and rocky when travelled alone
    But if you push people away eventually they'll leave
    And you'll have to struggle through life on your own.

    Loved that stanza, I could really relate to that one not by just personal experiences but from things I've seen my family go through! Oh how I loved this poem Eirisa! The way you write is just, I still have yet to come up with a word for it! The way I look at life is I am actually thankful for lessons we learn because if we haven't made mistakes how will we know how to better ourselves? Lets just be thankful you've learned!
    And thirdly, anytime you write a poem like this it always leaves me in tears not just to know things you been through, not just because how well you write, but how sweet it is of you to warn other people that there has been someone who has been through all things imaginable and might have had it worse then you! I miss your poems soooo much Eirisa and I half fell off my chair seeing that little red number next to your name! My insides did a little scream and said "ahh!"
    Wonderful Job as always sis and even if you went a year without writing, you work would NEVER be crap (ya hear me so keep writing), and it could never be voted a 1 or 2 or 3 maybe if a hater erads, a 4, but from me its always 5! Your super awesome!
    Love you forever and always
    Lil Titta, CHelsey-Lynn

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Words of wisdom straight from the heart. I think this was an awesome poem...your talent shines through in each stanza. Not only are these true rods of wisdom but each lines is engraved with truth.
    Can't wait to read more of your poems as this was so wonderfully and beautifully expressed.