Comments : First love

  • 18 years ago

    by anonymous

    Chin up hun.. good piece though. i like it.. xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Erikah

    I liked it, but try to put ur poems in stanzas

  • 18 years ago

    by Ren

    Aww hun, that saddened me. :( I'm so sorry! Seems you've had a rough time. Hang in there and it was a wonderful poem.