Speakless...

Could use some comma's and the flow could use a little work in a couple places, other than that, nice work

Good job, you might want to try making each line sound more complete. It's like each stanza was a seperated sentence.

"he won't ever try" it may sound a bit better as they to give a sense of more people instead of one person, it is also better gramatically

But the idea of this poem is great, the extremity of having no voice just to escape problems is immense. It shines and shows pure deperation just to be left alone
I really loved it, some of the rhyming as a bit off, but it wasn't too important
Another great read :)

Aww, Thats sad =[ I hope it's not true though. It was a great poem though. You could have gone a little deeper, So then people know why exactly you don't want a voice, But that's Just me. Other then that I liked it. Keep it up 5/5

luv natalie x-x

Very good job. One suggestion though, try not to ryhme a word with the same word. It kinda defeats the point of rhyming. Otherwise good job.