I liked it even though the flow was a bit off sometimes. i can relate. it was from your heart and that's where the best poems come from. 5/5 good work and keep it up.
pip xxx

Lovin the title...and the vibes I am getting from this are very good. Its a very sad and I sense even angry piece. I liked it- nice rhymin.Advice: maybe try and extend it....

[lostlaureate - come find me]

I like this. esp
'then it is just another reason
to put my voice in prison'
the only suggestion is that there are someword in a different tense than that would flow well.

I think you should fix your tenses and minor things to make the poem flow better. But other than that, I think it was good how it kind of contridicts itself of people not helping or asking to wanting somebody to tell you ho to lock your voice away. It was great organization. And it seemed planned out which most great poems are.

Thsi is a very good peice, written well and really hold attention well.

5/5

A very original poem, iv not read one with this theme before, nice one xx

Very good job. One suggestion though, try not to ryhme a word with the same word. It kinda defeats the point of rhyming. Otherwise good job.

Aww, Thats sad =[ I hope it's not true though. It was a great poem though. You could have gone a little deeper, So then people know why exactly you don't want a voice, But that's Just me. Other then that I liked it. Keep it up 5/5

luv natalie x-x

"he won't ever try" it may sound a bit better as they to give a sense of more people instead of one person, it is also better gramatically

But the idea of this poem is great, the extremity of having no voice just to escape problems is immense. It shines and shows pure deperation just to be left alone
I really loved it, some of the rhyming as a bit off, but it wasn't too important
Another great read :)

Good job, you might want to try making each line sound more complete. It's like each stanza was a seperated sentence.

Could use some comma's and the flow could use a little work in a couple places, other than that, nice work