The angels death

by cowgirlstar26   Apr 6, 2006


She cried alone
in the opaque room
in the stillness she layed
her life would be over soon

he ripped out her soul
for him she lived and breathed
He broke the heart of stone
now she has the darkest dreams

He didn't care
he took all she possesed
yet he left her to die
now she is obsessed

her wrist's bleeding
her pale skin once so fair
her black eyes once blue
no one will ever be there

so as the end draws near
she gasps for once last breath
her eyes turn glossy
love caused this fallen angels death

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  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Whole piece is filled with emotions. You always have good wording in your pieces. This poem is very powerful and greatly written.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -She cried alone
    in the opaque room
    in the stillness she layed
    her life would be over soon-

    Keep up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Ya love is a crazy it can kill you and save you just when u think all is lost love comes along and just when u think everything is perfect love takes u down amazing 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by broken reflection

    I loved the "opaque room" bit, it made it abstract, i love that....great poem, so sad/so dark 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by emorco08

    Y do we have the sadest poems? lol
    good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Bertha

    This was a truly spectacular poem.
    i can really relate to it, and everyones favorite kind of poem is one they can relate to.

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