The gets a 5. This is very inspiring and good/ keep writing. If you get some time read one of my poems please

I really like it, but I think the line 'In an opaque room' was a little awkward. But other than that, great job!

This was a truly spectacular poem.
i can really relate to it, and everyones favorite kind of poem is one they can relate to.

Y do we have the sadest poems? lol
good poem

I loved the "opaque room" bit, it made it abstract, i love that....great poem, so sad/so dark 5/5

Ya love is a crazy it can kill you and save you just when u think all is lost love comes along and just when u think everything is perfect love takes u down amazing 5/5

Whole piece is filled with emotions. You always have good wording in your pieces. This poem is very powerful and greatly written.
My favorite stanza is:

-She cried alone
in the opaque room
in the stillness she layed
her life would be over soon-

Keep up!