Im here for you if you need to tlak suzie.
I liked the poem too by the way
Love,
~Emma

One day you need to write a bad poem, so that way my comments arent all teh same :P.
Great work.

xoxo
Matt

Exellent! it was a perfect window into the emotions expressed so elequently. i loved it! it flowed well, and you used some exellent metaphores

Ruby

Amazing! Once again a poem I can relate to. I sometimes feel that way too. That I just think.. "this isn't me" Just the way you described it.

Very powerfull write. I loved how you used the "mirror" and the "rotten tree" in your poem. That makes it so wonderfull.

I also loved the part of "a part of me is stolen, a part of me is lost etc"
Very powerfull part...

Erm.. so.. basically I loved EVERY part of this poem! haha

Very well done once again sweety!

Lotsaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

Lol, thanks

This poem was excellent, very emotional just like... pretty much all your writes lol. 5/5

I liked this one and I felt like there is supposed to be a message here but I can't seem to grasp it. I love your work and I can't wait to read more.

Once again a fantastic piece of writing. you always grasp the concept of what you are writing.

Kat

Wow. I can really relate - that was such a great poem, I think me and you seem to have a lot in common, perhaps one thing: You are a far better poet than I'll ever be :)

Peace. [Sole]

Awesome job. It made me kind of sad because I feel this way a lot. I have written a poem like this before. I don't know if I put it on here or not. Awesome job.

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