EVERLASTING LOVE

by THE LADIES MAN   Apr 6, 2006


EVERLASTING LOVE

Your eyes won't let my thoughts go back to sleep.
The way I feel about you is starting to get deep
Your words draw me across thousands of miles.
And I can't help but see your face every time I close my eyes
My love has really grew for you over the years
I promise I won't cheat or lie to you and make you shed tears
I want you to be my queen and I'll cherish the ground you walk on
And I will always love you even when you're dead and gone
Why do I care for you so much I have yet to understand?
But what I do know is that I want your every wish to be my command
I want to be the one who open your lock doors and set you free
And be able to help you fly away, but not from me
I'm not saying that we would have a perfect relationship
Because no one is perfect and we all make mistakes
What I can promise is that I'll be honest and true
And I won't let anything get in the way of loving you
As long as I have you I don't need fortune or fame
For you are everything that a man could ever want in a woman, and all the riches he could ever claim
You make my life whole and you make my life complete
If you ever talked about leaving me my heart would skip a beat
You're the backbone of my life and the apple of my eyes
If you were to ever leave me, then how would I survive?
You're my everything; you're all that I know
You're the one who brings me joy and make my soul glow
I'll do anything in the world just to prove that my love is true
Even if that means going to hell because I'd burn for eternity just to be with you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bethan

    Awwww. ur poem was touching, heartfelt and full of passion, definitely 5/5, da girl in da poem is v.lucky 2 have sum1 write so creatively and passionately about her!!!
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by sierra

    Ur poem was very insightful. it shows how deep ur love is n how much u r willing to fight to keep it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    That's cute, especially the last line. The only mistake I noticed was you used "grew" when you should have used "grown". Other than that, it was a very sweet poem, I hope you showed it to the girl it is about.

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