by Melissa
Nicely done! |
by PS
Awesome. i cant totally relate. it is the story of my life. :) |
by Simon Hayes
Superb! A very enjoyable poem. A secret love between two people is always so thrilling. I love this poem I really do!! |
by Laura
AMAZING....hat is all I can say. |
by Angie
OMG, I can't believe you actually did it, you little thief!!!!! LMAO |
How enticing!!! I just loved it. You sure have a way with your poems, each and every one of them are just awesome. |
by Chelsey
CUDDLES!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED THIS POEM!!! OMG!....I wish a million teenagers could read this...you know what it reminds me of? High school students! In high school everyone is in everyone elses buisness and it is so annoying.I am thankful I am single because I don't want everyone in my buissness and I'm sure only a few people would know! Way to go on this write I totally loved it!! |
Very nicely penned Mary, great write!!! |
Wow, i mean this is so unqiue to write abt but then we all go thro same, ur poems are really amazing, so simple but so different. |
by -annie vandergaag
Very good poem, i enjoyed it a lot. i agree, people should just stay out of everyones business and then hurt from gossip and rumors would be kept to the very minimum. rumors hurt and im glad you spoke out like you did. keep it up! |
by xEmmax
Wow, great poem! i loved it, ur a very good writer :) 5/5, and thanku for all of ur comments, they mean a lot to me xxxxxx |