Comments : Sealed Lips

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Nicely done!
    "One day we may spill the beans,
    but until then our love remains a myth."
    ^^ These are my favorite lines, great job! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Awesome. i cant totally relate. it is the story of my life. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Superb! A very enjoyable poem. A secret love between two people is always so thrilling. I love this poem I really do!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    AMAZING....hat is all I can say.
    The flow is perfect and I was captivate by this read from start to finish.

    My favorite lines were:

    To them we're guilty until proven innocent.
    We decidedly plead the fifth.
    One day we may spill the beans,
    but until then our love remains a myth.

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    OMG, I can't believe you actually did it, you little thief!!!!! LMAO

    I love it, you took a different approach than I did with the title..... its perfect, the rhyme and flow are excellent. Beautifully done!

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    How enticing!!! I just loved it. You sure have a way with your poems, each and every one of them are just awesome.

    Best Wishes
    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    CUDDLES!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED THIS POEM!!! OMG!....I wish a million teenagers could read this...you know what it reminds me of? High school students! In high school everyone is in everyone elses buisness and it is so annoying.I am thankful I am single because I don't want everyone in my buissness and I'm sure only a few people would know! Way to go on this write I totally loved it!!
    Was this one of Sunny's topics? I can't remember! If so way to approach it!
    Loved this!
    Chelsey-Lynn

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very nicely penned Mary, great write!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow, i mean this is so unqiue to write abt but then we all go thro same, ur poems are really amazing, so simple but so different.

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by -annie vandergaag

    Very good poem, i enjoyed it a lot. i agree, people should just stay out of everyones business and then hurt from gossip and rumors would be kept to the very minimum. rumors hurt and im glad you spoke out like you did. keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Wow, great poem! i loved it, ur a very good writer :) 5/5, and thanku for all of ur comments, they mean a lot to me xxxxxx