by Jennifer AkA Dopey Apr 6, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Love = Suicide |
Very nice poem words so powerfull and so meaning full..... |
by Michaela
I thought it was good, but i think you could've used a different choice of words and had more syllables and a few of the lines to make it flow better. but it was good, defanitly a start. :) |