Wow! That's awesome, Rebecca.
It's so tragic to lose a child, you capture the pain perfectly. The loneliness and longing....well done.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

So sad....and so beautiful...

This is such an emotional piece, great job def got my 5 vote keep writing and take care hun sarah x

Dark yet beautiful

Wow this is a really nice poem indeed.

all the best and take care
5/5

ReBecca, this poem was outstanding! Oh, and so heartachingly sad. Wow! You could not have done a better job using the topic silence. You expressed the pain of losing a child so very perfectly in this piece! SUPERB!

ReBecca, this poem was outstanding! Oh, and so heartachingly sad. Wow! You could not have done a better job using the topic silence. You expressed the pain of losing a child so very perfectly in this piece! SUPERB!

That was really sad.. yet very beautiful. You expressed yourself so well. Great poem!
God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

This poem is so deep and so emotional. It's so sad... im sorry. Great work... it must be harder than anything in this world...

This poem is so painful to read....the tears are falling fromjust the thought of lossing a child.

You're not in my arms
You're cold in the ground.
I can't stand the silence
Of listening for your sound.

This stanza really broke my heart.
Take Care Cindy

Very sad but beautiful poem, I can't imagine the pain of losing a child, I almost cried just reading this.

Oh wow.. this one I just couldn't help crying.. You captured the pain of losing a child I never thought I'd be able to feel or imagine.. This was absolutely beautiful and heartfelt, but so sad. It has a tragic beauty that is so appealing. Thank you for sharing this. I loved it

This poem is.. really something.
So many words crossed my mind
I don't know how to choose. [lol]
I could really feel the sorrow and tragedy of the piece.
And everything was written so well and your word choice fit nicely too.
It flowed well with itself.
And it was just so.. amazing :] 5/5