Living for something

by Si Chotic   Apr 6, 2006


Today it was a damage heart that told me to live life to the fullest

this heart, that was dead and could never live again, was telling me not to waste life

when this heart was alive, it took everything for granted

this hearts wild mistakes cost him his life

now this heart is telling me not to follow in his lonely footsteps

i have to live each day like its me last

not just for me but for this regretful heart, who no longer can.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    Someone on here has my name.

    myesha! YAY! 0_0

  • 18 years ago

    by JeSsIcA

    This poem was awesome..and really made me think..thanks for commenting on mine to..i really like your other poem to the bleeding one

  • 18 years ago

    by Chris Harding

    This is cool, I like the broken feel of such a short piece and the kind of style you've gone for, almost speaking from the hearts point of view as it were. Nice one, cheers for the comment - that poem is actually a song, one day if you convince me I'll send you the mp3 :p

    Peace x

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Brilliantly written.

    for some reason it would not allow me to rate it... butyou get 5/5 from me :)

  • 18 years ago

    by SEAN

    Wow this was great well written

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