Wow this was great well written

Brilliantly written.

for some reason it would not allow me to rate it... butyou get 5/5 from me :)

This is cool, I like the broken feel of such a short piece and the kind of style you've gone for, almost speaking from the hearts point of view as it were. Nice one, cheers for the comment - that poem is actually a song, one day if you convince me I'll send you the mp3 :p

Peace x

This poem was awesome..and really made me think..thanks for commenting on mine to..i really like your other poem to the bleeding one

Someone on here has my name.

myesha! YAY! 0_0