Words

Great poem. It speaks from the heart.

Great job.. i think this is the first poem ive seen like this .. so thats good that its unique and really takes you away from everyone elses. but i do think maybe longer and maybe more rhyming to have it flow better? but besides that i liked it! Keep it up

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

This is unique. ive never seen anything like. nice job.

Different: Kind of explaining why it's nerve racking somtimes to find the right words to say.

I like how it's unique. Maybe could have gone in depth with word choice so we could feel it, but on the plus side it didn't have the word love a thousand times or the word baby in it.

Hmmm i liked this poem alot i espeacially like your structure and how you used the words at the beginning almost like an emphasis or a catch to cause the reader to continue on to see what exactly your talking about. i admire that you were able to write an awesome love poem and not use the word "love" half a billion times like the majority of people do

only thing i can spot that seems out of place is: "the nest step" im going to assume this is a typo but uh yes other than that a great poem an excellent read keep up the good work and all that 5/5 for sure :)
~jacob