This is great...in its own abstract little way..most people write a love poem and over use the words love....the sarky little way you critically think about a word to describe it...is great... |
by Jacob Perry
Hmmm i liked this poem alot i espeacially like your structure and how you used the words at the beginning almost like an emphasis or a catch to cause the reader to continue on to see what exactly your talking about. i admire that you were able to write an awesome love poem and not use the word "love" half a billion times like the majority of people do |
by Kaylee
Different: Kind of explaining why it's nerve racking somtimes to find the right words to say. |
by PS
This is unique. ive never seen anything like. nice job. |
by Fallen~Tears
Great job.. i think this is the first poem ive seen like this .. so thats good that its unique and really takes you away from everyone elses. but i do think maybe longer and maybe more rhyming to have it flow better? but besides that i liked it! Keep it up |
Great poem. It speaks from the heart. |