Thunderstorm(Terzanelle)

by PS   Apr 6, 2006


In the dark of the night
the rain blurs all sight
in the dark of the night
teens smile in delight
the lightning lights the sky
the rain blurs all sight
making the senses lie
fearful the moon calls
the lightning lights the sky
all conversation stalls
to see the clouds war
fearful the moon calls
shaken to its very core
where ever are you now
to see the clouds war
do you in fear bow
in the dark of the night
where ever are you now
in the dark of the night

-terzanelle-

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  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Never seen this type of poem... it looks like it was done well though, i liked it, nice work :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jewelz

    It was rly good

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    I really really like this. you seem to always make your writes flow and great use of words. i love this one. its fantastic. i picture myself there

  • 18 years ago

    by Bogie

    Dang!!! Poonam, a most impressive read indeed.
    Your penned imagery is so vivid this write took
    me to Vietnam out in the bush on a dark rainy
    night held down by incomeing enemy fire leaving bright tracer clouds, waiting desperately for air support to arrive. Excellent job, I love when work
    like this can take me in and hold my attention in its
    world, in my dream, written by you. Fantastic and
    Write On,
    Bogie

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Poonam,

    Excellent job with this write, very vivid imagery created.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

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