Yay! i like this poem! its like im actually there.!

Wonderfully written. Great use of the form. Enjoyable read!

I really enjoyed reading this poem...I like the style you used...I admire it becuz I alwaya find it so hard to write like that...Great Job!!!

Love the style you chose to write this in.... it flows well and its written beautifully.

This is awesome!
"all conversation stalls"
^^^ Love this line, perfectly written!

Poonam,

Excellent job with this write, very vivid imagery created.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Dang!!! Poonam, a most impressive read indeed.
Your penned imagery is so vivid this write took
me to Vietnam out in the bush on a dark rainy
night held down by incomeing enemy fire leaving bright tracer clouds, waiting desperately for air support to arrive. Excellent job, I love when work
like this can take me in and hold my attention in its
world, in my dream, written by you. Fantastic and
Write On,
Bogie

I really really like this. you seem to always make your writes flow and great use of words. i love this one. its fantastic. i picture myself there

It was rly good

Never seen this type of poem... it looks like it was done well though, i liked it, nice work :)