No one cares

by girly†   Apr 6, 2006


My throat is getting tight
as tears begin to rise
all I feel is pain
Beneath my silent cries

I ask but no one listens
I give but no one cares
I cant control the aking
as my breaking heart does tare

can you hear the beating
riping out my chest
I'll experience this no more
as I put my soul to rest

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  • 17 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    !!! that poem was very nice and I enjoyed reading it
    Its poems like these that make me happy I happened to come upon them
    Great job and keep writing porfavor (please, haha)

    If you could please read/rate my poem Classic Love Song, I appreciate it
    I return the favor if you comment back

  • 17 years ago

    by Savanna Elaine

    Awe, babe, i loverz it! I miss ya, we need talk to sometime...my email for msn is Inlove927@yahoo.com....tlak to you soon

  • 18 years ago

    by Tru

    Nice lines keep the thought moving. You did well. Just remember no matter what someone says all good poems come from the soul so if you got your point across then thats all that matters.

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