In response to the universe
by erotema Apr 6, 2006
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"so apathy and mortal vice are now to be your state, |
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18 years ago
Grr...it won't let me vote.
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18 years ago
Short...very short...but great all the same. it was very deep...i don't think i would be able to do that with such a short poem...but you managed it perfectly. i loved it...5/5.
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18 years ago
by J Lau
Short, sweet, complex and deep. Excellent write. It's a good thing it's not any longer... lol. Great work! 5/5
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18 years ago
by Fallen Angel
Too true, too often do we attempt to find acceptance from a society we hate, I guess it begs the question do we attempt to gain acceptance because we hate it or do we hate it because it won't accept us...? Anyway, I digress, I really great write, you truely are a fabulously talented writer. Loved it 5/5
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18 years ago
by Laura
WOW you have just amazed me. Again your use of words is quite prodigious. Although the poem is short in length it speaks volumes and the message is loud and clear!
Welcome to my favorites list!
