by The Black Angel Lloyd Rose Apr 6, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
As the needles push into my vein, |
by Blacksand
You almost make me believe that you have overdosed before, and knowing you I bet you've come close. Good poem man. |
Well written dark poem with a strong message |
by Torn
Absolutely love it. |
by Kayd
I like the rhyme scheme you used, it really adds to the overall effect of the poem. |