This is a very interesting read. It's quite off-beat and different from your other work. Although of the "5 Ws" I don't understand why "she" is the Why rather than the Who. I'd love to know!

Your a really good poet...You make mine look like nothing!

Hey good poem ive been checkin you out you sound pretty cool check me out tooooooo ok dont 4get

much love,
boricuabeba