Fly Away

by melly xx   Apr 6, 2006


Please God
let me get away
help me fly far
show me the way

don\'t look back
leave the pain behind
help my fly away from here
to where the sun always shines

take me to your kingdom
in the clouds up above
take me where there is happiness
and unconditional love

please forgive me
wash away my sins,
let the gates of your kingdom open up,
and let me in

© MLS

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  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww. I like it. You started out a little rocky, but it smoothed out in the end.

    The flow was good. The rhymes were also good, but I found that the rhymes for the first verse were cliche. Really cliche. But the imagery and beautiful wording turned everything around in the end. Great job. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by trish

    Hi im trish and you left me a comment so thank it was to im pome thoes eyes i think so thank im 16 and live in CA oakland your good 4 your age of you want to talk im at leopaedwolf07 at yahoo.com

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Hey thats a very nice poem, with alot of meanings in it
    well in my case i like "let me in" beter.

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