Hey thats a very nice poem, with alot of meanings in it
well in my case i like "let me in" beter.

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Aww. I like it. You started out a little rocky, but it smoothed out in the end.

The flow was good. The rhymes were also good, but I found that the rhymes for the first verse were cliche. Really cliche. But the imagery and beautiful wording turned everything around in the end. Great job. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha