Incomplete

by Fallen Angel   Apr 6, 2006


I feel so alone
that I feel incomplete,
Like there is an empty space inside me,
Longing to be filled.
I cannot stand feeling this way.
If someone or something
could only fill this hole,
I would not be so incomplete.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    I know the feeling, very descriptive. 5/5, Em

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Brilliantly descriptive peice. short but powerful and says an awful lot within the lines

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    Thats exactly how I am feeling. . . . depressed. . . . .like theres got to something out there to complete me. . . . to lighten my life. . . .

    -Bloomed Rose

  • 18 years ago

    by trigirl422

    Thats amazing I know how that feels! Good job!!

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