Well written. I liked the flow of this poem. keep it up.

Well written peice. the story is clearly told anfd the flow smooth and uninterupted thoughout

5/5

I loved this poem, great job, def got my 5 vote, take care sarah x

Oh my gosh thank god he didn't kill hemself but between me and you i was in this position once where i was about to!!

Very nice. great flow. and deep. nice job!

That was very very very good! Very deep,,I loved it as I love all of your poems! 5/5!

Wow. Draws the reader in excellently, and builds up to release the tension in the last two lines.

he has no where left to run.

nowhere should be one word.

Other than that - awesome poem, One of the best I've read so far!

Peace. [Sole]

Definately 5/5
Your poems are so varied, so original and completely unexpected.
I like this poems form and how you told it.
I enjoyed it immensely.
~Wings

Very nice like the fact you didn't kill the character in the end most would there was some trouble with the flow but it may just have been me but very nice poem keep up the creative writing