Comments : The Past

  • 18 years ago

    by Cynthia--Nasr

    I kno how u feel .. im goin through it !! great poem i loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by CrysluvsBowie

    Excellent i liked it,it had a ring to it and yet so much detail i could imagine it right infront of my very eyes.

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    WHoA!!! I didn't really understand all of this poem but from what I did understand I REALLY LIKED IT....well done and keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Damion xxx

    Ohh thats sad babe=(
    hope ur ok now??time is the best healer of all hun u'll be fine =)
    good poem tho, very deep...
    well done xxx
    Damionxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Colton

    I agree with every Comment said'
    Touching and very sad, I know how your feeling right now.. but all we can do is move on and try our best to make new good memories, Great Poem, I felt every word in that poem as if it were real at that moemtn in time, Keep up the great work, i'd love to keep reading your Poems and most of all your '' Talent ''
    GodBless
    Colt

  • 18 years ago

    by [x]Demi[x]

    I love this poem you have a real talent and i can really relate to it. well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by lonelynow

    Wow. wow wow wow. i don't know what to say! this is such an amzing poem!!!!

    keep writing!!!!!

    lonelynow x x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This is very good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Honestly, this wasn't the best poem I've ever read because of your style. Even though you have a bumpy style (by style I mean how you break up the lines), though, this is one of the most touching pieces of writing I've read in a long, long time. I'm not sure if it's because I understand or if it's because you made me understand, but either way, if you fix your lines, this would be a stellar poem.

    "unsaid sorrys that can't be sent?"

    Great, great phrase.

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great poem here
    you have a beautiful talent.
    keep it up
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by lonelynow

    I love how it is all explained at the end.