I kno how u feel .. im goin through it !! great poem i loved it |
Excellent i liked it,it had a ring to it and yet so much detail i could imagine it right infront of my very eyes. |
WHoA!!! I didn't really understand all of this poem but from what I did understand I REALLY LIKED IT....well done and keep it up |
by Damion xxx
Ohh thats sad babe=( |
by Colton
I agree with every Comment said' |
by [x]Demi[x]
I love this poem you have a real talent and i can really relate to it. well done! |
by lonelynow
Wow. wow wow wow. i don't know what to say! this is such an amzing poem!!!! |
by UnToLd TrUtH
This is very good. |
by Samantha
Honestly, this wasn't the best poem I've ever read because of your style. Even though you have a bumpy style (by style I mean how you break up the lines), though, this is one of the most touching pieces of writing I've read in a long, long time. I'm not sure if it's because I understand or if it's because you made me understand, but either way, if you fix your lines, this would be a stellar poem. |
by Goran Rahim
Another great poem here |
by lonelynow
I love how it is all explained at the end. |