Nothing Makes Sense

by Torn   Apr 7, 2006


As I scribble words from the heart,
Still nothing makes any sense.
This head is twisted inside,
I can't find my common sense.

I'm making the wrong decisions,
I'm in the wrong places.
And all those that I love,
Are turning into distant faces.

My world is spinning, losing control,
Gripped by forces within,
As a constant battle rages deep,
I can't get over this last sin.

How can I be so cruel,
Please don't, don't look at me.
I feel so utterly disgusted,
Maybe I have caused this tragedy.

I was deemed forgotten,
Right from the start,
Nothing has changed,
Only I've fallen apart.

I can't stand by myself,
I can't see what is real.
These eyes have been burned,
And these scars are hard to heal.

Help me stand tall,
Help me see again.
Tell me what to do,
Please help me ease this pain.

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  • 18 years ago

    by the middle

    All ur poems are so good!! i really wish that i could write like u! lol
    i love this one... i can relate...
    love ya hun... xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo MaDdiSoN ♥•oOo[[i LuV JoSiE]]

    Hey babe...aw i wish u didnt feel this way...plz try 22 b strong...im still h0ping we can meet asap!! i luv yo0!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    That was awesome. 5/5. I have a couple of questions for you but i'll address that later.
    -Vino

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Oh huni that was a very gud one!
    I can so relate to it!! u did a gr8 job. I hope I cud be as talented as u r..bcuz most of times wen I try to write a gud poem it turns to forced rhymes and weird things.lol
    keep up the gud work
    Much Luv
    NemO x0x0x0x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aww hun, this is such a beautiful poem, i can relate to it as well, aww, this so beautiful, you've expressed yourself well in this piece of writing, im so glad to see you're submitting your poetry on here still, its a gift to read, take care,xxoo

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