Daddy And The deep Blue

by Luke   Apr 7, 2006


She sits alone..
A girl on the dock..
She stares at her watch..
The date on the clock..

It's been 13 years..
Since daddy left home..
Left a two year old girl..
With her mummy all alone..

She stares into the water..
See's a face looking back..
The face turns into daddy..
His eyes SO deep and black..

She waits here everyday..
To see a little sign..
Every boat she sees..
''Daddy's Home He's Mine!''

But daddy never comes..
He's lost out in the blue..
The ever lasting sea..
This dream is life and true..

She sits alone..
Wanting no one but him..
The man who left home..
Made all the home lights dim..

She doesn't care for waiting..
Another 13 years can fly..
But to her daddy's face..
She'll never say goodbye..

(c) Of Luke 7th April 2006

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  • 18 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    AWWWWWWWWWWW, that made me cry, it is so freaking beautful.....*sighs and yipes tear from eye* its a 6 out of 5 Luke, SWEET!!!!!!! :o)

  • 18 years ago

    by Michaela

    Oh that was the BEST dtory iv read on this and i cryed that was beautifull and it was just wonder full you should be a poet my daddy also left home but he came back love your story ;D

  • 18 years ago

    by Sparklylipgloss

    This is really good. I like how you captured the fact that it took place by a seashore. Nice Job!!

    comment back.

  • 18 years ago

    by tiffany

    This is a very good poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rosechild

    This poem is so good and it makes me cry....