by Luke Apr 7, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
She sits alone.. |
AWWWWWWWWWWW, that made me cry, it is so freaking beautful.....*sighs and yipes tear from eye* its a 6 out of 5 Luke, SWEET!!!!!!! :o) |
by Michaela
Oh that was the BEST dtory iv read on this and i cryed that was beautifull and it was just wonder full you should be a poet my daddy also left home but he came back love your story ;D |
This is really good. I like how you captured the fact that it took place by a seashore. Nice Job!! |
by tiffany
This is a very good poem! |
by Rosechild
This poem is so good and it makes me cry.... |