Agin Emma, Wonderfully done. I'm extermely proud of you, the flow is always beautiful in your poems =)

Emma, I was wondering.....do you have a poetry club? because I would be honored to have you Join mine, I'm the head of fish bowl =) so ummm give it some thoought for me babe =)

LOVE YOU!
Jenn

This is a brilliantly written peice

5/5

Very beautiful...i loved it. 5/5

Really well written, flowed incredibly well. nice to see a new one after quite a while. Im here for u em, love you xxx

*dances wooooooot * we got emma:D Lol okay hunny thankyou so much for joining I hope you have a blast, Umm... just read the welcom thread and post a bit about you on the "About the Members" thread =) and yeh.. have fun lol I'm so happy *dances*

Welcome to our Bowl!
Jenn

I'm sorry it has affected you so much... she probably doesn't notice what it's doing to your family. stay strong and take care hun,
-xXx-
P.S. amazing poem, by the way.

It was nice to see that you posted a new poem
i liked how you started and ended the poem with painting a picture, if gave your write a little twist that made it that much better

Wow. seriously..that was so powerful. i really..dont know what to say

Aww this is so sad...i h0pe everything is ok...?? well luv ya l0tz

I love the last verse =) Good job xxx

:( sad... but this story seems oh so familiar.. well written

Emma, this is heartbreakingly beautiful. Your words are so deep and powerfully moving. Incredible job!

Very touching, brought tears to my eyes. I have sisters as well, and I know what type of love you are talking about. Hope you and your sis the best. Excellent poetry you've shared. 5/5!!!!!

I read this but for some reason I must not have commented, it's heartbreaking and touching and so on. Perfect writing as usual ham xxx

Aww that makes me wanna cry. everything you wrote i can relate to... your words paint such pretty pictures in my head and everything just flows so smoothly. i love your work keep it up