I hope u dont mind but ill email this to my boyfriend.. its really nice

That's fine..
It's not really that good.. but if you want..

Wow!! this is really sweet. the girl you wrote this for must be v. special!!
5/5
love jess xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

This a very very very touching poem I was like aww... (I know it sounds to girly) but I really loved it keep it up!^_^

Heeeeeeeeeeeey.

This twas excellent, very cute again.
&& sweet, and you described your feelings well.

ttyl.x

Very different style of writing...i like it. :)

Sweet . . . so cute! I too enjoyed the style of the poem - normally ones like that rhyme, but in this case it stands out . . individual - I enjoyed it.

Peace. [Sole]

Very different the repetition really intesified how much you didnt want to let go it tied the poem in well together...but I think it could be made better if you added more substance...it was so beautiful I found myself wispering it...

[lostlaureate - come find me]