This is great keep it up!

Wow, its quiet a powerful poem. Very strongly written with a great flow and very heartfelt. Absolutely loved it. Excellent!!! I hope you feel better.

As usually this is amazing you always write some of the best poems I have ever read

*blinks*

Oh me lordee lord.
Dark poems are now me favourite.
I was imagining it as i was reading. eery. Heh. *grin*
Fooken loved.

Lots of luv, xxx

....so deep and.... hurt?! yet a beautiful piece, as always. i really hope you're doing ok hun. stay strong and take care,
-xXx-

Wow, this one gave a chill in me, great selection of words and its so easy to feel every inch of this one.

all the best and take care of urself

What pain is it that is hurting you so badly? Where is it coming from, and why is it there? What can I do to help take the ropes away from you beautiful neck and open the doors wide open so you are able to see? Can I take the salt from your wounds and hide those daggers away? I really love it when you are happy, and I hate to see you so upset and sad because life is too short. *more hugs* I send you my own smile and a few corny jokes in attempt to make you laugh. I'm here you for baby.

-Tainted Mikochan

Ooh wow this poem is intense and full of emotion, me likeey this poem a lot lol, wow you write so well hun, i cannot wait to read more of your work, take care,xxoo

Well written. 5/5 keep up the good work.

Nice job dude. I liked the imagery. 5/5
-Vino

Wonderfully written!! It stays on topic and it's filled with emotions!!
Keep the great work going!!

This amazing. I'm glad to see such a strong poem being told like as if anyone who reads it won't know exactly what your feeling only the person who wrote it themselvs would know. This is great =)

That was awesome..OK..I write poems similar to this one..but when I write them people always ask if they can read it..and I'm nice and say sure..then they get all upset because it's dark but they don't even know how things are in some peoples lifes..does that ever happen to you?

Hey babe i l0ve this p0em nd i no how yu feel 5/5!!! luv yu stax n stax always and 4ever best friendszz

This poem left me speechless... its so well written and so dark and emotional, perfectly mixed. altough i hope this isnt what you feel like or anything :S still great job , i liked this stanza the most:
"Being crammed between shut doors,
No longer ajar as the light has gone.
Yet I'm still stuck in between,
With nothing but feeling so withdrawn."

~StefQ

Bloody amazing, just bloody amazing

T-t-t-t-ook m-my b-breath away!

Holy &%$#. This poem is so &%$#@# fantastic!

I-I-I D-don't even know what to say!

*GASPS*

MASTERPIECE MASTERPIECE ALARM!

Lotsaaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

Thats nice!!...lovin it...it expresses MY feelings...

Hey sweety,

Hun, I am so sorry that I didn't commend on this poem earlier. I found out this morning (which is eleven hours ago)

So I read it with a cup of tea and breakfast, and I LOVED it! But I just didn't leave a commend cause I had to go (to school)

This poem kept haunting me through the whole day. I was trying to remember the stanzas. But I couldn't even remember the words! haha.

All I knew was that "it" was fantastic! haha
The only phrase that I could remember was;
" I didn't go away as I had assumed"

So that phrase haunted me for eleven hours, till I finally had some time to get the F back on an read it over, and take my time to commend. So here I am =)

Fantastic write hun. One of your best. But I always think that when I read a new poem of yours, cause you keep improving and impressing/surprising me.

Your poems are overwhelming. I love your work! Like many other (looks above) ^^^ haha

Well anyway sweety, this is just another great write!

I love you sweeeeeeeeety!!!

Lotsaaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

I feel that this poem held a lot of emotion and that it was beautiful. I love the last stanza the best. I think that it was the perfect ending for this peom. You are a great poet. Keep up the good work. 5/5