This poem got to me and it was so deep. I really liked it and I hope you write some more.
Your New Friend Marilyn(ThikkandSexii91)

Never wilt. Become an amaranth like me and bloom forever. they can break our bodies but they will never break our souls.

Nice work!!!

WOW.....WOW im speachless.....thats really sad hunni

I love your poem! I understood what you were trying to say. Excellent work.

It was good I feel the same way some times.

Very good poem! i love it!

................... Amazing, just wonderfully written, nice job

Just checkin to see if you've new poetry up... *wistful sigh*...

;)

xxx

Great word choice and great flow. It was well done with the imagery. Great job with it and the length was good for this piece.
~Faith

Wow! Lovely poem.. I like how it was short but very powerful and having so much meaning. I loved it, the flow and everything was perfect.

Also thanks for the Comment Hun. ^^

WHAT A BEAUTIFUL POEM
VERY SAD AND POWERFUL
BUT I DID LIKE IT AND YOUR FEELINGS ON PAPER IS EASY KEEP IT GOING

FROM
LANA
5/5