Leave me be (edited [second time])

Go from here and leave me be,
From your friendship now I'm free,
For the fetters which were cast,
Are broken, shattered, they couldn't last.

No longer am I blind to see,
Your thoughtlessness neglected me,
What kindness had you for a friend,
What will of yours had you to bend?

I'll find a friend who'll give a thought,
To whom acts of kindness have been taught,
I'll draw him near as you had been,
And live out now our friendship's dream.

And when you're gone I'll think about,
Our happy times I didn't doubt,
Then grow saddened by the thought,
Of how our friendship grew so taught.
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The poem above is an edit of the one below.

Some issues were brought up about the rhyming scheme sounding forced, so I edited the poem. It was also suggested that the last line's rhyme, "impose" and "repose(d)" was particularly forced.
I chopped off the d, and made it a noun in the above. I feel it sounds more forced after the edit, and I was much happier before (I've just killed the first of my poetic rules: a poem is what the poet wants it to be, not what a critic says it should be).

But what are your opinions?
The original is below.

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Go from here and leave me be,
From your friendship now I'm free,
I've no interest in you anymore:
Your friendship to me was so very poor.

Now the fetters which were cast,
Are broken, shattered, they couldn't last,
No longer am I blind to see,
You were thoughtless and neglected me.

What kindness did you do for a friend,
What will of yours had you to bend?
I'll find a someone who'll give me a thought,
To whom acts of Kindness have been taught.

So go from here and leave me be,
To reflect upon old miseries,
Your presence on me don't impose,
For now I wish to be reposed.