by xEmmax
Oh my gosh! that is such an incredible poem. i am actually quite speechless. there is so much truth behind it. i dont think iv read a poem that has put life's journey in to such a perfect idea. great work 5/5. xx |
by Angie
Wow, this poem in beyond amazing. You took a simple idea and created a thoughtful piece of work. I've got to say though, you have a very unique style of writing. Random yet effective. Great poem, especially the ending. Keep up the awesome work! 5/5 |
by PS
Awesome. its different and well written. obviously thought about. amazing! |
by Adriana
Nice job on this poem! I love how your poems are so easy to understand..keep it up! |
by Natalie
This was good. I liked it how you used life as a train basically. Great idea =] |
by azlan26
Wow even this poem seems fast, short lines and freeverse work with the idea of the runaway train, not thought out but just how they are |
Good poem |
by Always4You
That was very good! Thank you for your honest comments..I completely agree with you on both of them!! I will make them better when I cant...thanks again!! |
by Brigitte
Such a unique poem! It really makes me want to start thinking over where I'm going in life! I printed it out and it's actually taped to my wall of faverote poems! Speaking of faverotes you made ym faverotes list :) lol |
Wow, you did an unbelievable job explaining this and creating the amount of imagery in the space provieded. Brilliantly penned. And thanx for ur comment on my poem, it meant a lot, i didn't quite like the flow, but glad you did. Keep up the good work 5/5 :) |
by *~vixen~*
Another strong ending to the poem, i havent come across a poem that talks about life like this. very unique. |
by Megann Lee
That's a very true poem. Or at least I say it is. I really enjoyed it and I thought it was good. However...I thought this last Stanza was the best. |