The *thing* that no-one knows???????

by tara   Apr 7, 2006


There is a *thing*
that no-one knows
i long to tell
but no one to help

i wonder why
it seems impossible
the problem is
i don't have the guts

i truly regret
but now it's done
if time could go back
this i sure would change

i promise you
it wasn't my fault
it happened alone
no plan ahead

i tried to stop it
but there was no point
i put all my effort
but it was effortless

i long for a day to come
where they'll be no more
the *thing*
i wait for this day eagerly.

*i would truly appreciate it if you could rate and comment it means a lot and i alwaya return the favour!*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Steph

    Thats great, it really brings me in, now im curious as to wat the *thing* is but its all in the mystery. i love it 5/5. keep it up! and u comment on one of my first poems jus wanted to sa ythanx, first comment, meant a lot.

    keep writin, ill keep readin

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Very Good keep it up! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ryan (rdd)

    I think u have excellent technique keep writing =) and ty for the comment as well

  • 18 years ago

    by tara

    I thank all who write comments! thank you ever so much!

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