Aw gorjus poem, beautiful. i specially liked;

"She presses her hands
against the window glass
while waiting for the time to pass"

i love the way you write.
jesxx

Wonderfully written. I loved it. one of the best Nature poems I have read. keep up the good work.

Wonderful nature poem... Very powerful and deep. Enjoyable from start to finish... :)

This was really good. I don`t think theres anything i would change to it. It was beautiful! 5/5

luv natalie x-x-x

Kaylee,

Hats off and bowing, kudos! This is such a superb and splendid write, it is so lovely the way you have portrayed nature and it's grandeur. Well done.

Warmest regards,

Warmest regards,

Steve

WOW, wow! that poem was fantastic. i love nature poems, i love your poem... that was a well written structured poem. well done.. keep it up

Wonderful stuff....pathetic fallacy is definitely your thing. Meaningful and engaging poem....great stuff one of the most versatile writers I know...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Very well written peice, full of very vivid descriptions and great use of vocab. very well constructed and protrayed

5/5

Beautiful...great meaning....i loved it....
Emma 5/5

This is a very creative and special poem. Though I am not much for the flow of it because it does not keep the beat. That lowers the value of this poem.

Wow. im speachless. this so so beautiful. constructed well. its just gah amazing. I love it. I pictured every minute of it. well done.
Kat.

I love the way the trees talk, making them seem more human - you poem makes nature seem like one living being - that, very truly, humans are killing.
So much emotion in this poem, hard to write a decent enough comment about it.

That's truly awesome - I wish I could write nature poems as you can, my attempt left people cringing!! Very impressive write . . loved it.

Peace. [Sole]

Now, i loved that poem. It was brilliant, your are a fantastic writer.
Love Tara-Kay
xxxxx

This is most likely the best poem about nature that i've read.

Kaylee! WOW I am taken away!

I've never really been into nature poems, but i absolutely loved this one. great job!

Wow.. i didnt think someone could make nature interesting but you did.. it HAS to be the best poem about nature.. Your an amazing writer keep up the great work 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Nice well thought out

This is a great poem, I love the descriptions you gave, and how you expressed yourself about an actual problem. Very original. Keep writing. 5/5