WOW I LOVED IT..GOODBYE WOW I AM GLAD THAT YOU"VE REALIZED THAT THINGS ARE OVER< WHICHI KNEW U KNEW BUT IT TOOK LONGER FOR UR HEART TO ACCEPT IT. ( i am not yelln sry lol) |
by Always4You
Wow that was good...I liked how you compared your feelings to other things..Good job!! |
by just a poet
Wow, i dont get this u two r so obviously still into together but u with other poeple or chasing after others, i just dont get it. i mean u two r so made for eachother but hey. i'd so be with a guy who was like that for me but hey. |
by Spanish Star
I really loved this poem. Especially : " Its better to give then get. So what u did dont regret". It really gave me chills. That is so true. I just wish more people would realise that. Anyways..great job. But then again, I think all your poems are great. Keep it up ;) |
by aDORKable x3
Awwwe dave... that was touching...Is this your final part? you should print these out and give them to her! lol...maybe that would make things better or maybe it would make them worse... idk lol just trying to help...=) |