A good poem, though I'm a grammar freak and a few capitals here and there may clean it up a bit. ^^ Great work pal!

Great poem hun, thanx 4 the comment meant alot keep writing and take care sarah x

Wow this is good and sad at the same time keep up the good work ok pal

Jenna 5/5

OMFG MARIE THIS IS TOTALY AWSOME!!!!
Manda

That was a good poem! I just hope that this is just a poem and not how you truely feel..nothing is worth takin your own life!!!

That was a good poem! I just hope that this is just a poem and not how you truely feel..nothing is worth takin your own life!!!

Now this is a good poem. great work.