Great Job
This ~Torn Pieces Of My Heart~
if you didnt know
This poem was Great
but i just have one suggestion
Try..just Try..To write a poem in stanzas of 4..i just want to see how your work would be..

Great job
Im sure its for your man lol
5/5
~TBOY~

Great poem...as always, you bind emotions with words excellently. i can identify with this poem sooo well. keep up the good work lissa