Lovely dedication
Lovely Poem
Great job
your gettin better
ohh and if i havent said so
Congratulations on Breakin your 100 mark
5/5
~TPOMH~

Great poem
Sorry that i dont comment alot
I hate to sound ungreatful
But you keep downrating me
Even if my poem isnt the best..
If i have a 4.9 or over please dont rate me unless your going to rate me a 5.. Because i really dont like watching my overall rating go down every time you vote.. Sorry if it sounds mean but .. oh well..
I do love your poems, keep it up and ill try and comment a bit more

Excellent poem, I can identify so well with this...and as for my 'rapper style' its the music i was listening to, and I think it sounded better than something like 'you all' or w/e.

to others reading this comment, you have no clue what i'm talking about, so haha :-P.

back to the poem, keep up the great work, your love poems are really good to read

Hey Lissa, thanks for commenting, and you prevailed me to read your poems. I like this one cos it has real nice emotion in it. I like how you always stick to the topic, when others seem to stray. You have nice imagery skills as well. Really hard to find. Your on my favourites list, your next to Tripp, who is another favourite of mine. Love to see more of you.

Luv Niquee

Very well done i loved it.