Very interesting. Makes you realized that being born is life then you just die after words. I mean could've put more details in that but hey! i thought it was a good poem i might say. Short and kinda gets to the point. Keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

So true!

I liked this one... you could have added something in the middle about like... the ups and downs of life ya know? but dont listen to me, its perfect just the way you wrote it....its short, sweet, and to the point. you get what you want across in your writing and thats what i love. -jen-