Wow, Emotion filled poem. This was very well written. Keep up the good work.

~Joe~

"a fighters heart now ripped to pieces
no ones fault, there is no reason
only hope that it soon ceases
but it will now end this very season"

i loved this stanza the best. 5/5

All of it was perfect. keep it up.
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Wow, this was a really good poem. Short, yet powerful. I hate clowns. lol