My Dreams

Breathtaking. You capture your theme in a vivid detail that makes it wholly dreamy and pleasurable to read. Your description of the watercourse embodying dreams is neat, elegant, and well-thought-out. I truly enjoyed this piece, Miss Marcella.

Wow...to me this poem was powerful! I love the words you chose even though most of it I don't understand since I'm dumb every morning. lol. Lovely poem. 5/5

Short sweet and simple with such moving emotions. Another great piece by you. Although I liked the 2nd one better then this it was still worthy of a 5/5 definitly. Creative. Good work~mel

Wow again with an awesome poem..mi gettin jelous haha jkjk but still makes me go in awe a 5/5!

Short, simple, and it gets the point on target. Great job. :)